love in many forms

[keoshiwarrior376]

ok i really don't do poems but i thought i would try since i did the poem"who am i" so i going try.



-A Kataang poem-

The way his eyes looks at me
is like a never ending story
the way he passes me
is like he has some feeling for me
i guess that's love




ok please tell me if i need some work or it was somewhat ok

remember i have never really writen a poem

[rcandee]

nice job.

[keoshiwarrior376]

thanks it's kind of stupid oh well...i was kind of tired when i was writing it so ok.

[noodle16]

I like it, its true. its real . its very beautiful nice job

[keoshiwarrior376]

thanks but i still think it is weird

[noodle16]

whatever you say, like they say

your ur own worst critic