Post by keoshiwarrior376 on Apr 14, 2008 19:14:45 GMT -5
this is story i wrote a while back. i don't know if it is good enough to go on. if you don't like it i wouldn't continue. If you do like it i will countinue. if it needs some work i wil continue but just make it better.
- Avatar State -
written by: Keoshiwarrior376
The comet of soin well come in about a month and I can't think straight anymore thought Aang silently. The group was still at the western temple planning the new attack. So far Sokka has thought of some great ideas. Toph's feet have finally healed, so now she can walk now. Katara has been acting strange lately and I don't know why?
Aang was walking in back and forth... pacing. Toph couldn't take it anymore Aang pacing like this. She gets up and grabs Aang by the arm and says softly
‘‘let’s take a walk''
Aang and Toph walk on top of the temples. They are now on top of them. They sit down on the grass stretched out. Aang closed his eyes. Toph starts to speak.
''Aang what’s wrong?''
Aang opens his eyes and turns around to look at Toph. Even though she can't see he still looks at her puzzled.
‘‘What do you think Toph?'' said Aang in a kind of snotty way.
‘‘Don’t give me attitude. I just asked you a simple question twinkle toes.'' said Toph. Aang again closes his eyes. Trying to think. What felt like forever Aang finally speaks.
‘‘All this pressure of being the avatar, and to save the world. I have failed about three times. People are giving up hope on me, and I don't want that. ''
Toph nods taking in the info Aang was telling her. She then said.
''Aang its ok and I really don't think you should worry you have us remember? It’s not like you can't go into the avatar state anymore.''
Aang laughed a little then stood up and started to walk off. Toph gets up racing after Aang. She grabs him by his shirt and yanks him around so he can look at her. Softly and with a worry tone in her voice Toph speaks.
''Aang you can still can go into the avatar state?''
Aang nods his head no then realizes that Toph can't see. So he just said ''no I can't Toph.''
Aang sits on a rock and Toph sits on the floor of the ground. She looks like she’s a kid ready to here a story for story time. Aang begins. ‘Remember when you asked if it went well with the guru. And I said I went fine well that was a lie.'' Toph nods in kind of a shocking way. Aang continues'' when I was about to control the avatar state I had a vision about Katara in trouble. So what do you think I was going to do leave her there? I came out of the avatar state and grabbed my things to get on appa. So the guru says if I leave now I will never be able to go into the avatar state ever again. So I left. Aang cups his hands and hinds his face in shame.'' it was a stupid mistake''
Toph gets up ‘no it wasn't.'' Katara was really in trouble and you saved her life and some others too.'' Aang puts his hands to his side saying''toph thank you for the encouragement but, the mistake I took to save a love one is now hurting me now. If we are too late to defeat the fire lord when the comet passes we well have no way of defeating him. Maybe just...maybe if i had the avatar state i would be able to defet him.'' aang sighed got up and walked back to camp.
Toph still sat there thinking all that Aang just told her. She thought oh no Aang has lost the avatar state and I’m the first to know. Also she was thinking he left that great power just to save Katara. Now doesn't that show true love? With that thought Toph to walk to camp. To herself she says ''will Sokka do anything like that just to save me?'' thoughts of Sokka popped in her head. Then a picture of Suki came up. ''Maybe he will someday save me but right now I think his heart is set on Suki.''
Toph doesn't sit next to Aang just because he needs some space. Is there some secret way to get back the avatar state? And if so how? Will Aang ever tell anyone about his loose?
The night Aang and Toph talked, it seemed harder just to sleep. Toph could here Aang always waking up for a terrible nightmare. His heartbeat was always racing. Sometimes that night he would get up and walk over to the fountain mumbling. So Toph stayed up always watching Aang. Always worrying. At night he slept talk saying ''I'm sorry'' or ''what a mistake...What a mistake," Finally morning came the hot sun started to shine throw the cracks of the temple. So for once that morning Toph made breakfast. It wasn't that great but eatable.
Finally everyone was up and saw the breakfast and ate it. Aang wasn't up yet so Katara let him sleep in. Katara was shocked and confused at the same time that Toph made breakfast. Aang woke up minutes later looking terrible as can be. He walked over to the fountain of water and splashed his face with it. Katara saw what Aang did and went over asking ''ruff night?'' Looking up Aang nodded. ‘‘Do you want to talk about it?'' Aang shook his head no heading for some breakfast.
- Avatar State -
written by: Keoshiwarrior376
The comet of soin well come in about a month and I can't think straight anymore thought Aang silently. The group was still at the western temple planning the new attack. So far Sokka has thought of some great ideas. Toph's feet have finally healed, so now she can walk now. Katara has been acting strange lately and I don't know why?
Aang was walking in back and forth... pacing. Toph couldn't take it anymore Aang pacing like this. She gets up and grabs Aang by the arm and says softly
‘‘let’s take a walk''
Aang and Toph walk on top of the temples. They are now on top of them. They sit down on the grass stretched out. Aang closed his eyes. Toph starts to speak.
''Aang what’s wrong?''
Aang opens his eyes and turns around to look at Toph. Even though she can't see he still looks at her puzzled.
‘‘What do you think Toph?'' said Aang in a kind of snotty way.
‘‘Don’t give me attitude. I just asked you a simple question twinkle toes.'' said Toph. Aang again closes his eyes. Trying to think. What felt like forever Aang finally speaks.
‘‘All this pressure of being the avatar, and to save the world. I have failed about three times. People are giving up hope on me, and I don't want that. ''
Toph nods taking in the info Aang was telling her. She then said.
''Aang its ok and I really don't think you should worry you have us remember? It’s not like you can't go into the avatar state anymore.''
Aang laughed a little then stood up and started to walk off. Toph gets up racing after Aang. She grabs him by his shirt and yanks him around so he can look at her. Softly and with a worry tone in her voice Toph speaks.
''Aang you can still can go into the avatar state?''
Aang nods his head no then realizes that Toph can't see. So he just said ''no I can't Toph.''
Aang sits on a rock and Toph sits on the floor of the ground. She looks like she’s a kid ready to here a story for story time. Aang begins. ‘Remember when you asked if it went well with the guru. And I said I went fine well that was a lie.'' Toph nods in kind of a shocking way. Aang continues'' when I was about to control the avatar state I had a vision about Katara in trouble. So what do you think I was going to do leave her there? I came out of the avatar state and grabbed my things to get on appa. So the guru says if I leave now I will never be able to go into the avatar state ever again. So I left. Aang cups his hands and hinds his face in shame.'' it was a stupid mistake''
Toph gets up ‘no it wasn't.'' Katara was really in trouble and you saved her life and some others too.'' Aang puts his hands to his side saying''toph thank you for the encouragement but, the mistake I took to save a love one is now hurting me now. If we are too late to defeat the fire lord when the comet passes we well have no way of defeating him. Maybe just...maybe if i had the avatar state i would be able to defet him.'' aang sighed got up and walked back to camp.
Toph still sat there thinking all that Aang just told her. She thought oh no Aang has lost the avatar state and I’m the first to know. Also she was thinking he left that great power just to save Katara. Now doesn't that show true love? With that thought Toph to walk to camp. To herself she says ''will Sokka do anything like that just to save me?'' thoughts of Sokka popped in her head. Then a picture of Suki came up. ''Maybe he will someday save me but right now I think his heart is set on Suki.''
Toph doesn't sit next to Aang just because he needs some space. Is there some secret way to get back the avatar state? And if so how? Will Aang ever tell anyone about his loose?
The night Aang and Toph talked, it seemed harder just to sleep. Toph could here Aang always waking up for a terrible nightmare. His heartbeat was always racing. Sometimes that night he would get up and walk over to the fountain mumbling. So Toph stayed up always watching Aang. Always worrying. At night he slept talk saying ''I'm sorry'' or ''what a mistake...What a mistake," Finally morning came the hot sun started to shine throw the cracks of the temple. So for once that morning Toph made breakfast. It wasn't that great but eatable.
Finally everyone was up and saw the breakfast and ate it. Aang wasn't up yet so Katara let him sleep in. Katara was shocked and confused at the same time that Toph made breakfast. Aang woke up minutes later looking terrible as can be. He walked over to the fountain of water and splashed his face with it. Katara saw what Aang did and went over asking ''ruff night?'' Looking up Aang nodded. ‘‘Do you want to talk about it?'' Aang shook his head no heading for some breakfast.
