Green Flames {Chapter one}

[keoshiwarrior376]

Green Flames
written by: keoshiwarrior376
Chapter one




The day Aang was defeating the fire lord the fire lord hit Aang so bad that he could have died but he didn't. So after he got hit, Aang took out the fire lord. So they won the battle, the gaang left to go tell the earth kingdom the good news. But on the way something terrible happened.

The gaang was all on appa going overseas that’s when it happened.

Katara: hey Aang are you ok you don't look so good. Do you want me take over ''driving'' appa?

Aang: no I’m totally fine I can handle it.

Toph: even though were not on the ground I can tell your lying.

Sokka: Aang let Katara take over you really don't look so good.

Aang: no I’m fine just let...me ...drive....I’m...F...I...N...E

Aang looked very pale, and looked like he could pass out any min.

Toph: SOMEONE HELP AANG NOW!!!!!

At that moment Aang closed his eyes and started to slide off of appa. Katara ran over and caught Aang right before he fell totally off.

Katara: Sokka go drive

Katara carried Aang over were everyone was sitting. Everyone’s faces were shocked. At that moment Katara took out her water and tried to heal Aang, but it was working.

Toph: is he ok?

Katara: I don't think so

The Aang stated to open his eyes again.

Katara: Aang are you alright?

Aang: I don't think so

Sokka: what happened at the battle that would make you like this?

Aang: I did get hit pretty hard by this glowing fireball but the problem is it wasn't red like normal fire it was Green.

Toph; Green?

Aang: yea green. When it hit me I felt like it just sucked the life out of me.

Katara: that doesn't sound normal

Toph: I think we need to go see someone if your hurt this bad by a green flame.

Aang: I think so too

So the gaang changed their direction to go back to the fire nation to go talk to zuko. When they got there zuko was there waiting for them to.

Katara: zuko what would a green flame do to a person?

Zuko: a green flame?

Sokka: yea and Aang said it felt like it sucked the life out of him

zuko: well all I can tell you it isn't good.

[ilovethisshow]

Dang, I was going to use 'Green flames' to Kill Aang, you totaly stole my Idea. lol. but really I was. doesn't matter though. great job. ON TO THE NEXT PART

[keoshiwarrior376]

thanks

i got the idea while watching the the part on avatar when zuko's father was atacking zuko.

Also i was building a fire outside for camp one day. I threw some plastic or some green stuff and i saw some green flames.

it's cool that ever day if you watch closly you can find something intersting and soon write about it.

[noodle16]

very interesting... i hope you dont end up killing one of them off tho