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Post by keoshiwarrior376 on May 4, 2008 16:29:13 GMT -5
OMG wow love the story!!!!!!!!!! i felt like was there. Please continue i want to know what happens to toph.....
GReat story!!!!!!!!
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Post by noodle16 on May 5, 2008 18:04:01 GMT -5
This is awesome, u should write another! i loved Aangs answer !!!
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Post by BlueWater on May 12, 2008 18:24:48 GMT -5
THANKS AGAIN EVERYONE!! noodle i also like how he answered that y i put it  Part 3 some time very soon so stay tooned |
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Post by noodle16 on May 12, 2008 18:48:11 GMT -5
sorry 4 being so stupid guys i just get alittle excited and i like to make people feel good, but sorry ill step back a little!!
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Post by BlueWater on May 12, 2008 21:58:38 GMT -5
your not being stupid at all just funny We (kataangers) always get excited 4 good kataang stories unless that's not the only reason your excited |
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Post by noodle16 on May 13, 2008 17:47:21 GMT -5
i guess, i just hate getting on peoples nerves! but hey, i like to be me at the same time and thats just who i am, im a little ditzy and confused lately
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Post by FourNations93 on May 16, 2008 15:43:23 GMT -5
Good job on your first story, Kataang! I finally got around to reading it! XD
I like how you get indepth with the thoughts. I just suggest that you break up when people are talking. Instead of
He thought she looked beautiful. "How you doing, Katara?" Aang asked. He patted the seat next to him.
You can break it up into:
He thought she looked beautiful.
"How you doing, Katara?" Aang asked. He patted the seat next to him.
More text or whatever down here...
The spacing makes it easier to read on the internet, since you can't ident paragraphs on this site
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Post by BlueWater on May 16, 2008 15:45:33 GMT -5
ok
thanks for the info!
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Post by FourNations93 on May 16, 2008 16:45:58 GMT -5
Yeah XD no problem. Do you get what I'm saying? My example is kinda bad because its so short. If you need a better one go to my story.
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Post by noodle16 on May 16, 2008 16:53:26 GMT -5
kinda short? HMM... sorry 4N, but ive never really seen a post by you that was short!
lolz
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Post by FourNations93 on May 16, 2008 17:17:47 GMT -5
lol XD I'll take that as a compliment  I post long posts because I always have a lot to say... |
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Post by noodle16 on May 17, 2008 16:18:09 GMT -5
Hmmm... i cant disagree to that, i have alot to say to!!
me and my loud mouth!!
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Post by FourNations93 on May 17, 2008 17:33:54 GMT -5
Us loud mouths got to stay together then? |
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I post long posts because I always have a lot to say...